Picture This- “Come On, Let’s Go”



“Hurry up”, she said.

“Why?” he said

“We need to get there now” she said

“What’s the rush?” he said.

“The train leaves soon”, she said.

“Which train?” he said.

Suddenly she stopped dead in her tracks, contemplating the question. Which train should they take? All around them were hundreds of commuters scrambling around. Some glancing at their watches and cursing inwardly that they were late for work, dodging and weaving through the crowd like Olympic sprinters. Others keeping a firm hand on their lifeblood of coffee in one hand, and the folded up newspaper in the other. Mothers with strollers charging like bulldozers through the crowd. Tourists with all manner of cameras gazing upwards and firing off shots. Seniors doing their best to avoid being run into.

As people moved past in swarms around them, some brushing and bumping into these two solitary stationary targets among this sea of movement she suddenly smiled and turned towards him.

“It doesn’t matter”, she said.

“We can go anywhere we want today”, her smile even larger now as she headed towards the ticket machine.

“Come on, let’s go.”

This was inspired by The Thought Card’s  Picture This Challenge. You can find out more about the challenge here

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39 thoughts on “Picture This- “Come On, Let’s Go”

      • Lol…I’m all about matrimonial self protection :-). I wasn’t sure if this would work and I wasn’t planning on publishing it tonight. Normally I read on my way home from work but tonight I was a little tired so I closed my eyes but this idea popped in my head along with this particular photo I took on a little excursion last January. I was doing a blog about clocks and Grand Central definitely had to be a stop. I’m glad you liked it and that it is something new. This was such a great challenge. I must do more of these, but having this come from you and having it be a photo challenge I really wanted to participate. So thank you Danielle for such an awesome idea!


  1. Wonderful, the subtle discovery of being free to go anywhere, and amongst a maddening crowd is where you can actually think clear ; where you can precisely be alone to think………I have experienced this at the very busy terminals.Nice post.

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  2. Sometimes it’s difficult to see that the only thing stopping us from living life is our own self! But once the madness is dialed up all the way, it almost fades in the background, like white noise, nothing else exists but the realization, “I’m free!”
    I can imagine myself in that picture- great job conveying the that feeling, and thank you for sharing 🙂

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    • Thank you very much! What you say is so true. That white noise sensation in the middle of all the madness is an odd sensation. And then that flicker of I’m free! Knowing you can do whatever you want. Go wherever you wish. Really appreciate the comment. In the two years of writing this blog this is only the second bit of fiction I have written so comments like yours make me think I should do more of it.

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  4. This is so aptly described. It reminds me of a moment I once had in a train station in Oxford. I had a 24-hour pass. I could go anywhere I wanted, take as many trains as I wanted. Everyone around me had a direction, a destination. They moved with purpose. My only purpose was to experience. I went to Cardiff, Wales that day. Just because I could.

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    • Thank you 🙂 I liked that line too but I’m not sure how I came up with it! I’m so glad you like this story. This was only my second attempt at writing a piece of fiction out of all the blogs I have done over the last two years. Getting such a nice response from people like you is the best! Thank you!

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